What a lovely poem, Julchen - a present for all of us as well as Trianne. My favorite part: Your warm hand is touching my heart… Your smile is touching my heart… I’m burning.
And I love the declarations Sam makes at the end of each stanza - they all build up to the final "I'm lost."
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Date: 2008-07-10 05:55 am (UTC)From:My favorite part:
Your warm hand is touching my heart…
Your smile is touching my heart…
I’m burning.
And I love the declarations Sam makes at the end of each stanza - they all build up to the final "I'm lost."