I'm hooked already! What a great line - it sounds like thunder. The dynamism of the language echoes the storm overhead. Again I could quote this whole thing back to you, because I really enjoyed the phrases, like
mysterious gypsy crystals, Freedom in chaos
We wonder why Zeke is so afraid. Does he fear the storm itself? Did something bad happen to him in childhood during a storm? But Casey is here and knows just how to hold him until the storm in his soul has passed. And then he's back ...
welcoming me with fire and lightning in his eyes ... this sensual thunderstorm he doesn't fear.
That is indeed a beautiful picture! *wants more of the sensual thunderstorm* :-)
Amazing, Julchen! And a perfect picture of Zeke to illustrate this scene.
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Ravening thunder rumbles
I'm hooked already! What a great line - it sounds like thunder. The dynamism of the language echoes the storm overhead. Again I could quote this whole thing back to you, because I really enjoyed the phrases, like
mysterious gypsy crystals, Freedom in chaos
We wonder why Zeke is so afraid. Does he fear the storm itself? Did something bad happen to him in childhood during a storm? But Casey is here and knows just how to hold him until the storm in his soul has passed. And then he's back ...
welcoming me
with fire and lightning in his eyes ...
this sensual thunderstorm
he doesn't fear.
That is indeed a beautiful picture! *wants more of the sensual thunderstorm* :-)
Amazing, Julchen! And a perfect picture of Zeke to illustrate this scene.