Good morning! Good morning! GOOD MORNING!

[julchen11]

 So another week just begins, I can hardly wait to end it :-) 

I hope your weekend was as lovely as mine, darlings. 
Thanks to YOU! 



Title: Secrets
Pairing: C/Z
Rating: PG

Looking at your face

While you are sleeping…

The tiny little movements

Show me you are dreaming…

I’m jealous

about your dreams…

Am I in your dreams, Casey?

I told you

I’ll risk to love you

even it means I’m walking on

thin ice…

because

I know exactly what’s

beneath the surface…

MY surface…

You don’t,

not yet.

I hope you’ll be strong enough

to cope with this,

I’m not.

Not for myself.

Not yet.

Things will get broken,

first of all my

pride…

 

dark secrets, too.

 

But for you I’ll be strong,

as strong as I can, Casey.

I called you ‘my angel’

the other night, but

even angels feel the

Pain of

Love.

‘You deserve better’ I said,

‘I’ll get the best’ you told me.

 

You called your self ‘ordinary’.

Your no less a miracle for

Being ordinary.

 

It hits me like an arrow –

For the first time in my life

I’m truly in love .

Have a wonderful week, my friends!

Love,
Julchen

Comments

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

Have a great week too hun Love Amy

[prisca1960.livejournal.com]

I love it to wake up in the morning, to come to LJ and to find a poem from you. It's a great start in a new day!
A wonderful morning, a wonderful day, a wonderful week for you, too.

[miss-nightowl.livejournal.com]

That´s an interesting picture of Elijah. Never saw that one before.
Looks like he´ s gotten something on his contact lens.
I know aaaaaaaaall about that! *hugs him*

[i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com]

It's just lovely to get into Zeke's mind through you. :)

[aprilkat.livejournal.com]

Underneath the mysterious tough guy, Casey managed to touch love and tenderness. So poignant.

[addie71.livejournal.com]

I’ll risk to love you Yes, this is Zeke.

[aliensouldream.livejournal.com]

I love the way this is a companion piece to 'Across all Ages'. I like seeing both sides of the same scene this way and hearing their thoughts.

Zeke seems to reveal a dark possessive side here, in being 'jealous' of Casey's dreams. I can identify with that, being insanely possessive, LOL! If someone has been trained by experience towards distrustful feelings, then love has a painful side of uncontrollable need and insecurity.

I’ll risk to love you
even it means I’m walking on
thin ice…

It's quite disturbing that he sees himself as 'thin ice' and that 'things will get broken'. He's not sure of his own strength and there are 'dark secrets' lurking 'beneath the surface'. I could quite imagine that Zeke would fear the extremes of emotion and even action that he could be driven to if he surrenders his independence of spirit to another person.

even angels feel the
Pain of
Love.

I think he is wise to call love pain because even when it goes smoothly between two people, there is always the dread of them being taken from you or falling ill. You have to be able to smother those feelings in order to enjoy the present and that depends on your own state of mind and your experience. I think Zeke is afraid of bringing his darkness into Casey's life, of clouding his innocence with paranoid fears.

Your no less a miracle for
Being ordinary.

In fact, it is Casey's pure faith that makes him extraordinary, a miracle in Zeke's life.

I love this, and Zeke's realisation that hits like an arrow that he is in Love. That is a great metaphor - both Cupid's dart and mortal wound. Oh Love, what have you done? There will be pain, but it will be worth it - it must be!!

Thank you, Julchen. You give our thoughts rooms to explore in. Have a wonderful week!

*hugs*

[honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com]

Ohh... Zeke, he'll love you no matter what!! *hugs the poor boy*!

[roxy42.livejournal.com]

There´s an entry in my LJ about my WE (which was great btw.), you might be interested in:
http://roxy42.livejournal.com/265571.html

Let´s hope the week will be over soon. But I have to admit, it started quite okay... ;)

[mews1945.livejournal.com]

Things will get broken,
first of all my
pride…

Zeke is so brave to risk loving Casey, just as Casey's brave to risk loving Zeke.

[slipperieslope.livejournal.com]

I love the beginning to this one:
Looking at your face

While you are sleeping…

The tiny little movements

Show me you are dreaming…

I’m jealous

about your dreams…

Am I in your dreams, Casey?

Sets the whole tone beautifully!

Have a good week, my Julchen!

((hugs))

Bee

[frodosweetstuff.livejournal.com]

Am I in your dreams, Casey?
Ooooooh, that was my favourite bit!!!!!!! And the secret beneath the surface...

Thank you for this lovely poem! *hugs*