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[julchen11]

Title: Balance
Pairing: C/Z
Rating: PG

Now it’s possible for us

to see each other whole

against the darkness.

 

I’ve spread my dreams

under your feet,

Zeke.

So my feet won’t touch

the ground.

 

We’ve changed a piece

of our dream-world

into a long, intimate

dance together…

We’ve changed it

into reality …

 

Together we’ve found

our own sense

of balance.

 

I’m glad you are

my first love,

I’m glad I am

your last romance.

 

You said you are not perfect,

neither am I

but

 

our love is.


Now I'm off armed with books, folders, pen and paper! See you later, guys! 

Love,
Julchen


Why can't I upload pictures, today? Hmmm... We'll wait and see :-)

Comments

[addie71.livejournal.com]

You said you are not perfect,
neither am I
but

our love is.

- I think so too!

[aprilkat.livejournal.com]

Lovely delineation of a relationship that makes the people more than they were, because they are together.

[prisca1960.livejournal.com]

I wish you a wonderful, sunny sunday afternoon, Julchen!

[mews1945.livejournal.com]

I’m glad you are
my first love,
I’m glad I am
your last romance

I love these lines so much. I can almost feel Casey's feelings myself.

[honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com]

I’ve spread my dreams

under your feet,

Zeke.

So my feet won’t touch

the ground.

Honey, that's just wonderful. *hugs*! You make 'em so sweet!

[aliensouldream.livejournal.com]

Now it’s possible for us
to see each other whole
against the darkness.

So many lovely phrases in this. It's like a light of recognition has banished the shadows of doubt. They are whole, no longer damaged and in fear.

I’ve spread my dreams
under your feet,
Zeke.
So my feet won’t touch
the ground.

This made me think of a flying carpet. The power of Casey's dreams, carrying them beyond the present reality to the magic of a future together.

So ofter the mood and metre of your poems seem to match their subject. The 'mirror' stanza here reflect that:

I’m glad you are
my first love,
I’m glad I am
your last romance.

In completing each other, the imbalance of their lives is cancelled.

You said you are not perfect,
neither am I
but
our love is.

Imperfect humanity balanced by a perfect love.

Beautiful, thoughtful, full of a warming calm. I hope you had a lovely Sunday, Julchen!

[frolijah-fan-54.livejournal.com]

You paint such gorgeous images with your wonderful words, dear Julchen - this is breathtaking.

[i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com]

Zeke being Casey's first and last is so sweet. :)

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

Thank you Love Amy