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Aliensouldream posted this pic- it's very inspiring, isn't it?
She asked for a little gothic poem ... I gave it a try...
This is for you, dear!
Title: Stranger
Paring: C/Z
Rating: ??
I awoke to the cold gray twilight
seeping through
the closed blinds.
I decided to wait
for the darkness
because I don’t like the light.
I don’t like any kind of light.
The next time I awoke
it was in the dark of night.
Now it was time …
I tried to walk straight
but the thunder in my head
was beyond control.
There were you.
More illuminating than I could bear …
“Take care, little one,”
I growled to myself.
You looked concerned …
Innocent and shy.
“Do you believe in fate?” –
you asked.
“No, because I don’t like the fact
that my life is being controlled…”
Easy prey!
My voice became more hoarsely
“I wish your mother had told you
to stay away from strangers…”
You had no chance.
Good night, f-list! I hope you're doing as well as I do! Weekend and Froday is close!!!
Love and hugs,
Julchen .
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Date: 2008-11-20 11:48 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-11-21 12:43 am (UTC)From:You are such a master at this, dear Julchen - thanks so much for sharing this with us!! *BIG HUGS*
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Date: 2008-11-21 01:39 am (UTC)From:I hope you have a lovely weekend.
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Date: 2008-11-21 09:37 am (UTC)From:Have a nice weekend, Julchen!
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Date: 2008-11-21 04:31 pm (UTC)From:*hugs*
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Date: 2008-11-21 08:38 pm (UTC)From:*hugs back very hard*
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Date: 2008-11-21 08:39 pm (UTC)From:Love and hugs,
Julchen
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Date: 2008-11-21 08:44 pm (UTC)From:Have a lovely weekend yourself!!!
*mwwwwwah*
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Date: 2008-11-21 08:44 pm (UTC)From:Thank you, darling!
*hugs back very tight*
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Date: 2008-11-21 10:24 pm (UTC)From:Oh, this is superb!!! Just the perfect gothic atmosphere, exactly what I was hoping for.
There were you.
More illuminating than I could bear …
What a fantastic phrase, and so revealing. An innocence more powerful than the light. And a predator more powerful than darkness. *trembles*
The 'cold gray twilight' and the 'thunder in my head' all add such a brooding tone. This is shivery good, dear Julchen, and sexily dark! A fateful stroll indeed! Who could resist such delicious prey? And a wonderful last line!
I love your take on this, dear! Thank you so much! *hugs and squeezes*
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Date: 2008-11-21 10:51 pm (UTC)From:THANK YOU very much, my dear!
*hugs back more hard*
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Date: 2008-11-27 01:22 pm (UTC)From:Thank you! Very intriguing!
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Date: 2008-11-30 08:10 pm (UTC)From:Thank YOU, my dear.