ext_81079 ([identity profile] elderberrywine.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] julchen11 2008-11-29 02:21 am (UTC)

Oh, my!!!! I've been away for a few days -no internets! :(

But I got back just in time for this gorgeous piece. I love the sense of movement -

snow and ice crunching under

their restless feet…


the tiniest bit of hesitancy? shyness? from Sam, and Frodo's sure persistence -

Sam drifts away…

Tender touches

burning holes

with hot fingertips

everywhere.


And that lovely melting ending -

In the depth of winter

Sam finally learns

there is in him and

in Frodo

an everlasting summer.


Just so beautiful! Thank you very much - *happy hugs back*

EBWine




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