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My dear friend [livejournal.com profile] claudia603   gave me these 6 words:
crystal, pearly, crisp, elaborate, wistful, heart

So this is for you, sweetheart:

Title: "King"
Pairing: Aragorn/Frodo
Rating: PG

The Earth told me last night

what I feel –

what you feel…

Your eyes pearly pools …

reflecting the total sky.

The wistful frame is broken –

broken by hopes and faith.

The version of heaven

crystal clear as window glass …

The window to my soul

is opened

to let in crisp air …

A pretty little background

elaborated by you, little one.

The clouds of sorrow

that weight my heart …

gone.

You survived.

You’re alive.

The torch now holds the flame of

my beating heart.

 

You are more king

than I ever will be.



Have a marvelous day, my friends. .

Date: 2008-12-02 09:28 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com
Wow so powerful and beautiful! *hugs*

Date: 2008-12-02 11:25 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] addie71.livejournal.com
So beautiful. You are amazing.

I hope you are having a marvelous day too, my dear.

Date: 2008-12-02 12:23 pm (UTC)From: [personal profile] shirebound
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This is one of your best, Julchen. Very powerful.

Date: 2008-12-02 02:02 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com
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awww...*melts into a puddle of goo* I'm so honored to have my very own poem! Thankyou thank you!! That was gorgeous!

Date: 2008-12-02 02:10 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] withywindle01.livejournal.com
Oooo...F/A! This is beautiful, my dear!

Date: 2008-12-02 06:50 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com
Good GOD. Once again, I'm just sitting here, staring into the screen, loving your words. I'm eating 'em up today--I'd missed so many delectable delights!!

You are more king
Than I will ever be.


Perfect. Absolutely perfect. :D!

Date: 2008-12-02 09:12 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] aliensouldream.livejournal.com
You make magic with these words!

Your eyes pearly pools …

reflecting the total sky.

The wistful frame is broken –

broken by hopes and faith.



The meter is like a song. Kingly and wistful - a perfect evocation of Aragorn.

*hugs*

Date: 2008-12-03 04:01 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] frolijah-fan-54.livejournal.com
Dearest Julchen - you have a way with words that is truly amazing!!

That last line is so profound - and so true. This is very powerful - and that pic of Frodo (EYELASHES!!) is so beautiful. Your words do that picture proud. *hugs*

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