6 words for honeyandvinegar

[julchen11]

My dearest honey gave me these 6 words:
Soda (what a word! phew!), pinch, meaning, hilarious, fingertips, brush

So here it is, honey.  This one is for YOU:

Title: "Feelings"
Pairing: C/Z
Rating: ??

Fingertips

touch in the darkness…

tracing lines

of emotions.

Lips brushing lips slightly

while you dribble

Soda

across my body…

mixed with a pinch

of sweet red wine…

to be

hilariously

lapped up by

your eager tongue

 

Can you see

what I see,

Casey?

Can you feel
what I feel?

 

I’ll take you to a place

you’ve never seen before…

 

I’m still there.

 

This night

my reflection

reached out

to touch

the glass –

shattering this so far

virtual reality…

 

I’ve found the truth

with just one look -

magic and wonder

has a special meaning

now…

each moment

with you
...
flying fantasy

in

never ending
eternity.
 

Thank you for everything, sweetie!

Love and hugs,
Julchen

Comments

[mews1945.livejournal.com]

Magic and wonder are very good words to describe this poem. It's like flying.

[claudia603.livejournal.com]

Yum...your poems are always so magical!

[addie71.livejournal.com]

Delightful!

magic and wonder
has a special meaning
now…

Soda! Very well done!

[frolijah-fan-54.livejournal.com]

Another amazing poem - you are an absolute wonder!!

[sayhello.livejournal.com]

Oh, that's such a beautiful painting!

Hewene

[i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com]

Rrrrrrrrrrrr

Lapping up soda, hmm?

:D

Mwah!

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

I loved every word in this poem

[prisca1960.livejournal.com]

;) Zugegeben, ich war neugierig, was du aus den vorgegeben Worten machst. Hast du toll gemacht!

[honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com]

OHHH *HOW* did I MISS THIS?? Good lord, honeypot... *hugs*!

It's wonderful. I could see that geeky lil' man pouring soda on his lover, heeheehee!! It's fantastic... a 'flying fantasy' is right! *GLOMP*!

[aliensouldream.livejournal.com]

Wow, I missed this! Slowly catching up from Mews's lists.

What a great image of Casey dribbling wine and soda on Zeke's heated body *faints* They've truly found a fantastical place.

I’ve found the truth

with just one look -

magic and wonder

has a special meaning

now…

each moment

with you


How do you do it with such different words?

*hugs like crazy*