because it's Froday

[julchen11]

 

Title: Forget
Pairing: F/S
Rating: none

Forget

Forget the world and close your eyes, Frodo.
Let me take you to the light.
Can you imagine this wonderful place?
Can you smell the fragrance?
Can you imagine the colors?
Please ...
tell me...

I'm free ... even it's only for a very
short time. 
I have so much to give,
because I'm so tired of all this fear. 
You gave me so much...
You let me forget ...
you let me remember...

The place I'll always see is 
YOU,
Sam. 

Comments

[addie71.livejournal.com]

The place I'll always see is
YOU,
Sam.

Heartbreaking. Beautiful.

[aliensouldream.livejournal.com]

This is so complex. I thought the first stanza might be the Ring, seductively whispering to Frodo about what it could do for him. But then I thought it might be Sam, or the memory of Sam, trying to comfort him.

"The place I'll always see is
YOU,
Sam."

I always think of Sam as the embodiment of the Shire, so it is perfect that Frodo should refer to him as a place, THE place of longing and contentment, home.

Thank you Julchen. Powerful scenes and words.

[hobbitlove83.livejournal.com]

My darling!!

Sam speaking to Frodo on Mount Doom... he must have brought back memories of smell, and colours, and anything worth remembering-
and only you could have put it in such wonderful words!

Thank you, sweetheart, from the bottom of my heart!

*loves you*

[shoesparks.livejournal.com]

In your arms I find comfort,
Silence from the whispers in the darkness,
though I cannot recall the beauty of this world,
through your gentle touch, I remember you.


thanks for your inspirations...

[mews1945.livejournal.com]

You let me forget ...
you let me remember...

There is so much to love about this poem, but those lines spoke so strongly to me of Frodo's need for Sam's love and support.

[belleferret.livejournal.com]

Those last lines! Yes, Sam IS the epitome of all that is good in the Shire.

[claudia603.livejournal.com]

It's such a gift to us to receive your wonderful poetry gifts!! **lots of hugs**

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

So very beautiful and touching I'm amazed.

[i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com]

Oh, Frodo. *sniffs*

[withywindle01.livejournal.com]

What a beautiful heartbreaker!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you soooo much, addie!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Wow. Thank you, sweetie. Sam is strong and Frodo can always count on him, he's like a rock.

Love you,
Julchen

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Lovey!!!!
I'm so very happy you like it, your words mean so much to me, my dear.
Thank you!

*loves you back*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Awww, that's so beautiful, Shoe!
Thank YOU, sunshine! Another time you made me smile!
*hugs tight*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

When I finished these lines I KNEW they had to be for Sam spoken by Frodo...
Thank you, Julia!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

You're so right, Sam IS the Shire ...

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Words like these keep me going, Claudia!
Thank you sooo very much.

*hugs you back very hard*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

It would be all the more hard to survive this quest ...

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

You're simply a darling! Thank you, Amy!
*snuggles closer*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

*hugs you gently*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Awww, thank you sooo much, sweetie!
I'm glad it worked for you.

[aredhelebenesse.livejournal.com]

Oh that's so touching, I almost made me cry. Thank you so much for this, Julchen!

*hugs tight*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Awww. I'm soooo glad you like it, sweetheart!
*hugs back more tight*

[frolijah-fan-54.livejournal.com]

Oh my - so poignant and powerful.

You let me forget........
You let me remember.....

Stunning!! *BIG HUGS*

[frodosweetstuff.livejournal.com]

The place I'll always see is
YOU,
Sam.
Awwwwwwwwww!! I think this is sooo beautiful and a great variation of the "home is where the heart is" theme! Thank you, sweetie!!!!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Awww, thank you so much, my dear. Wow, this reply popped up today! Sometimes LJ is as quick as a roadrunner :-)
*biiiigest hugs back at you*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

You're such a sweetheart! I simply love YOU ... and Frodo and Sam!
Thank you, dear!