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I overslept, I'm on diet and I'm tired. But who cares?
Being on diet is so very hard so I have to keep my fingers busy :-)
Don't run to the fridge and eat ...
sit down and write.
Maybe it works *giggles and grabs notebook*
Title: Dreams
Pairing: C/Z
Rating: PG
“Dreams”
Looking at this picture taken just last evening,
I wish I could smile with such innocence.
Amazing … after all we had to go through.
Who are you, mysterious boy?
You wander through my dreams,
Teasing me,
haunting me,
tempting me.
You strayed unknowingly into my soul.
But there’s fear insight,
This blinds you ,
This hurts your heart.
This hurts me, too.
I’ll try to change it.
I’ll make no promise – promises are
Tears waiting to fall.
You are not longer
Lost and alone.
In dreams you are never lost,
I can share mine with you…
I want you to be whole and true.
When I found you I had nothing,
You offered me your heart
And now I have everything.
My heart fell hard,
For the loving heart inside of you
Fantasy became reality,
Reality became you.
Little words ...
so much said but
not enough.
I think I should tell you ...
Have a wonderful day, my friends!
Love,
Julchen
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Date: 2008-06-24 06:00 am (UTC)From:Beside that I have still this damn cold, I'm great :-)
Oh I really need a diet again too but you know, it doesn't work at the moment. I could eat all day *sigh*
*sends you extra big hugs*
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Date: 2008-06-24 07:29 pm (UTC)From:You could eat all day? You can't imagine what I want to eat ... *sigh*
I still had watermelon and lemon lime ... and I'm so hungry!
*clings to you*
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Date: 2008-06-24 06:47 am (UTC)From:Promises are tears waiting to fall .... Oh, this is sooo beautiful. The rest of the poem, too, but I love, love, love this part!
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Date: 2008-06-24 07:30 pm (UTC)From:*smooches you*
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Date: 2008-06-24 07:25 am (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-06-24 07:31 pm (UTC)From:*snuggles closer*
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Date: 2008-06-24 09:46 am (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-06-24 07:31 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-06-24 11:10 am (UTC)From:Tears waiting to fall."
Ooh, I see in this the change of their relationship from friendship to more. Zeke so untrusting of himself but so drawn to this "haunting", "tempting" boy. I think he is worried how admission could damage them but not speaking hurts them more.
Zeke is so self-aware in this: "I wish I could smile with such innocence." He knows how damaged he is. He doesn't offer assurances, he only offers to 'try' but for him that means so much. It is Casey's "loving heart" that attracts him, something good and pure, and so maybe he can be saved after all.
I like how he has already crossed over in dreams to be with Casey and now he is just balanced on the edge of that happening in reality. And I'm so glad he decides to tell Casey how he feels! Very beautiful Julchen!
Ideas also for dieting - reorganize all your folders of Elijah photos, this works for me :-)
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Date: 2008-06-24 07:33 pm (UTC)From:I'm glad it worked for you, my dear. It's a fine line between relationship to friendship to something more ... that's more than true.
Thank you, my dear. You should see me smiling NOW!
Reorganize elijah folders ... great idea! Thank you! I know I'll get lost looking at the first picture ... *sigh*
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Date: 2008-06-24 01:48 pm (UTC)From:I hope you just write all day! That's my plan for myself (I hope I can follow through)
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Date: 2008-06-24 07:34 pm (UTC)From:At the moment I simply can't stop writing. One could say my muse is kissing me :-))
Your plans are the same? That's great! I'm looking forward to your wonderful works.
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Date: 2008-06-24 04:19 pm (UTC)From:Reality became you
I love that! It's both concise and expressive.
I hope you had a wonderful day, and I'm sorry to hear about your diet. My husband is on diet as well, and it's a true ordeal!
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Date: 2008-06-24 07:36 pm (UTC)From:It has been a wonderful day, absolutely. Though I'm always very hungry (it must be the I'm-on-diet-syndrome) I'm sure I'll make it *fingers, toes and nose crossed*
Have macigal evening, my dear!
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Date: 2008-06-24 08:10 pm (UTC)From:So you're on diet? I hope you'll keep yourself busy so that you're not tempted to eat!
*hugs you so tight*
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Date: 2008-06-24 08:28 pm (UTC)From:I'm very busy at the moment and hey, the 11th day is over!!!
*hugs you all the more tight*
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Date: 2008-06-24 08:34 pm (UTC)From:You offered me your heart
And now I have everything.
This is so beautiful. Zeke couldn't help falling for Casey, who's worthy of his love.
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Date: 2008-06-25 06:17 pm (UTC)From:Thank you, Julia!
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Date: 2008-06-25 02:32 am (UTC)From:Another wonderful and poignant and powerful and emotional poem - thank you so much!!
Fantasy became reality,
Reality became you.
How wonderful!!
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Date: 2008-06-25 06:17 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-06-25 10:09 am (UTC)From:I’ll make no promise – promises are
Tears waiting to fall.
What a perfect line!
Good luck with the diet, sweetheart. The writing diet sounds good to me.
*Love and Hugs*
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Date: 2008-06-25 06:19 pm (UTC)From:Diet still works, I just have to take my feather quill to keep my hands busy :-))
Biggest hugs right back at you!
Love,
Julchen