It's a birthday

[julchen11]

 Happy birthday dear trianne
I hope you're having a wonderful day, full of love and sunshine, joy and ... hobbits! 
I wish you all the very best! 



Title: "Your eyes" 
Pairing: F/S
Rating: PG

 

"Your eyes"

The smile upon your face

Beauty painted for all to see

I’m jealous.

 

Blue eyes sparkling at me

a blush of pink upon your cheeks…

I’m nervous.

 

Your speaking to me gently …

taking me to the land of fantasy.

I’m dreaming.

 

Your warm hand is touching my heart…

Your smile  is touching my heart…

I’m burning.

 

With your eyes you’re telling me

“I love you, too”

I’m lost.

Enjoy your day, enjoy this beautiful life, sweetie!

Love and big tight birthday hugs, 
Julchen

Comments

[shirebound]

Oh Julchen, that's one of your best!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

*squeeeeeezes you*
Thank you so much, Janet! I'm glad you like it :-) and very very happy, too!
*clings to you*

[melyanna-65.livejournal.com]

What a beautiful poem, my dear. I can relate with all those sensations, just like Sam!

Thanks for sharing, sweetheart, have a nice evening!

*hugs*

[trianne.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much, dear! *hugs*

[honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com]

Oh, gorgeous, as always. So emotion, a whole BUNCH of 'em, rolled up into one Sam! :)

[mews1945.livejournal.com]

That's so lovely.

With your eyes you’re telling me

“I love you, too”

I’m lost.

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

That's just so beautiful and so touching thank you :)

[claudia603.livejournal.com]

oh how beautiful, sweetie!

[belleferret.livejournal.com]

Ah how lovely!

*happy sigh*

[addie71.livejournal.com]

Another gorgeous one, sweetheart. The last verse is just beautiful.

[aliensouldream.livejournal.com]

How did I miss this??

This is so beautiful, the evolution of Sam's emotions. I can see his shyness giving way before Frodo's kindness, being pulled into the land of dreams and magic by his words, and falling utterly when those eyes return his love! Sam's is a heart worth winning :-)

Thank you Julchen!

*big hugs*

[aprilkat.livejournal.com]

Oh, I like this very much! Sam is lost in those eyes, and so are we!

[withywindle01.livejournal.com]

*melts all over the place*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you, Mel...
Sam is incredible, isn't he? That's why we love him as much as Frodo :-)
*hugs back*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you like it, birthday girl :-)
I hope you had a wonderful day!
*hugs you back*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

You're such a dear, sweetiepie!
Thank you sooooo much!
*clings*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Do you know how encouraging all those wonderful words are? My English won't be the very best (not yet) but all shyness has gone with the wind :-)
Thank you so much, Julia!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank YOU, my dear! Your words mean so much to me, I guess you know it already :-)

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Awww, thank you, darling!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you, dear Belle! *sighs with you*
You icon is very DISTRACTING ... and soooo gorgeous *sighs again*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you, dearie! We love our hobbits, don't we?

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

OMG! You left me speechless another time. Thank you so much for your wonderful words.
Your lovely reply is a story by itself ... And yes, Sam's simply a darling:-)
*biiiigggest hugs back at you*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

I couldn't have said it better, who wouldn't be charmed by this beautiful eyes ...
Thank you, my dear!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

*smooches you*

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[marigold6.livejournal.com]

What a lovely poem, Julchen - a present for all of us as well as Trianne.
My favorite part:
Your warm hand is touching my heart…
Your smile is touching my heart…
I’m burning.

And I love the declarations Sam makes at the end of each stanza - they all build up to the final "I'm lost."

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[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Awwww,thank you so much, my dear. I'm glad you like it :-))
Who could resist them both? *hugs tight*

[frodosweetstuff.livejournal.com]

Awwwwwwwwwwww, that is sooo beautiful. Gentle and slow like love slowly blossoming. Thank you, sweetie! *hugs*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

You're always welcome... I don't know what to say but THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH! *hugs tight*