It's a birthday

[julchen11]

 Happy birthday dear trianne
I hope you're having a wonderful day, full of love and sunshine, joy and ... hobbits! 
I wish you all the very best! 



Title: "Your eyes" 
Pairing: F/S
Rating: PG

 

"Your eyes"

The smile upon your face

Beauty painted for all to see

I’m jealous.

 

Blue eyes sparkling at me

a blush of pink upon your cheeks…

I’m nervous.

 

Your speaking to me gently …

taking me to the land of fantasy.

I’m dreaming.

 

Your warm hand is touching my heart…

Your smile  is touching my heart…

I’m burning.

 

With your eyes you’re telling me

“I love you, too”

I’m lost.

Enjoy your day, enjoy this beautiful life, sweetie!

Love and big tight birthday hugs, 
Julchen

Comments

[shirebound]

Oh Julchen, that's one of your best!

[melyanna-65.livejournal.com]

What a beautiful poem, my dear. I can relate with all those sensations, just like Sam!

Thanks for sharing, sweetheart, have a nice evening!

*hugs*

[trianne.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much, dear! *hugs*

[honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com]

Oh, gorgeous, as always. So emotion, a whole BUNCH of 'em, rolled up into one Sam! :)

[mews1945.livejournal.com]

That's so lovely.

With your eyes you’re telling me

“I love you, too”

I’m lost.

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

That's just so beautiful and so touching thank you :)

[claudia603.livejournal.com]

oh how beautiful, sweetie!

[belleferret.livejournal.com]

Ah how lovely!

*happy sigh*

[addie71.livejournal.com]

Another gorgeous one, sweetheart. The last verse is just beautiful.

[aliensouldream.livejournal.com]

How did I miss this??

This is so beautiful, the evolution of Sam's emotions. I can see his shyness giving way before Frodo's kindness, being pulled into the land of dreams and magic by his words, and falling utterly when those eyes return his love! Sam's is a heart worth winning :-)

Thank you Julchen!

*big hugs*

[aprilkat.livejournal.com]

Oh, I like this very much! Sam is lost in those eyes, and so are we!

[withywindle01.livejournal.com]

*melts all over the place*

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[marigold6.livejournal.com]

What a lovely poem, Julchen - a present for all of us as well as Trianne.
My favorite part:
Your warm hand is touching my heart…
Your smile is touching my heart…
I’m burning.

And I love the declarations Sam makes at the end of each stanza - they all build up to the final "I'm lost."

[frodosweetstuff.livejournal.com]

Awwwwwwwwwwww, that is sooo beautiful. Gentle and slow like love slowly blossoming. Thank you, sweetie! *hugs*