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JudithK ([personal profile] julchen11) wrote2008-07-08 10:13 pm
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It's a birthday

 Happy birthday dear [personal profile] trianne
I hope you're having a wonderful day, full of love and sunshine, joy and ... hobbits! 
I wish you all the very best! 



Title: "Your eyes" 
Pairing: F/S
Rating: PG

 

"Your eyes"

The smile upon your face

Beauty painted for all to see

I’m jealous.

 

Blue eyes sparkling at me

a blush of pink upon your cheeks…

I’m nervous.

 

Your speaking to me gently …

taking me to the land of fantasy.

I’m dreaming.

 

Your warm hand is touching my heart…

Your smile  is touching my heart…

I’m burning.

 

With your eyes you’re telling me

“I love you, too”

I’m lost.



Enjoy your day, enjoy this beautiful life, sweetie!

Love and big tight birthday hugs, 
Julchen
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[personal profile] shirebound 2008-07-08 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh Julchen, that's one of your best!

[identity profile] melyanna-65.livejournal.com 2008-07-08 09:25 pm (UTC)(link)
What a beautiful poem, my dear. I can relate with all those sensations, just like Sam!

Thanks for sharing, sweetheart, have a nice evening!

*hugs*

[identity profile] trianne.livejournal.com 2008-07-08 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, dear! *hugs*

[identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com 2008-07-08 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, gorgeous, as always. So emotion, a whole BUNCH of 'em, rolled up into one Sam! :)

[identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com 2008-07-08 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
That's so lovely.

With your eyes you’re telling me

“I love you, too”

I’m lost.

[identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com 2008-07-08 10:29 pm (UTC)(link)
That's just so beautiful and so touching thank you :)
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[identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com 2008-07-08 10:30 pm (UTC)(link)
oh how beautiful, sweetie!
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[identity profile] belleferret.livejournal.com 2008-07-08 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah how lovely!

*happy sigh*

[identity profile] addie71.livejournal.com 2008-07-09 01:48 am (UTC)(link)
Another gorgeous one, sweetheart. The last verse is just beautiful.

[identity profile] aliensouldream.livejournal.com 2008-07-09 10:34 am (UTC)(link)
How did I miss this??

This is so beautiful, the evolution of Sam's emotions. I can see his shyness giving way before Frodo's kindness, being pulled into the land of dreams and magic by his words, and falling utterly when those eyes return his love! Sam's is a heart worth winning :-)

Thank you Julchen!

*big hugs*

[identity profile] aprilkat.livejournal.com 2008-07-09 11:29 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I like this very much! Sam is lost in those eyes, and so are we!

[identity profile] withywindle01.livejournal.com 2008-07-09 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
*melts all over the place*

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[identity profile] marigold6.livejournal.com 2008-07-10 05:55 am (UTC)(link)
What a lovely poem, Julchen - a present for all of us as well as Trianne.
My favorite part:
Your warm hand is touching my heart…
Your smile is touching my heart…
I’m burning.


And I love the declarations Sam makes at the end of each stanza - they all build up to the final "I'm lost."

[identity profile] frodosweetstuff.livejournal.com 2008-10-14 10:33 am (UTC)(link)
Awwwwwwwwwwww, that is sooo beautiful. Gentle and slow like love slowly blossoming. Thank you, sweetie! *hugs*