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Title: "Don't"
Pairing: C/Z
Rating: G

My heart sees what’s invisible to my eyes.

You don’t quite know how to feel …

 

Don’t be always that realistic.

Vision gives us the impulse

to make pictures our own.

To me imagination is like

breathing …

Your imagination is

out of focus –

still.

 

That’s why you won’t depend

on your eyes.

That’s why you won’t believe

that there's something going on
between us.

 

Let your visions flow …

dare to dream…

 

For quite a time the silence

isn’t the same anymore.

 

I don’t count my

innumerable deaths

when we say

good-bye.

Not anymore.

 

Don’t step back.

Don’t be afraid.

 

Love makes us whole

and complete.

There are memories –

memories deep in my heart.

I remember your trembling lips

soft and cool

gentle but demanding.

Didn’t you enjoy this one  kiss?

Don’t let this first kiss be our last…

Please…

 

Do you really want to be alone?

Do you like your company in empty moments?

 

I don’t believe it, Zeke.

I just don’t …

I can’t believe it.

 

I know you

will stand

in the centre of the

burning fire.

With me.

The time will come

you’ll know this, too.

 

Sometimes I’m so

stupidly happy

because of the beauty

of my dreams.

 

Maybe some day

I’ll have the courage

to tell you

how

I feel...



I hope the week started very well for you. Oh my, I don't like Mondays THAT much...

Good night, my friends!


Date: 2008-09-01 09:41 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] aliensouldream.livejournal.com
Oh my dear, there is so much amazing beauty in here that I am going to wait and give proper feedback tomorrow. But for now please have a special anti-Monday hug from me *squeezes*

Date: 2008-09-02 04:15 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
*biggest Thursday hugs to you, love*

Date: 2008-09-01 11:16 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] addie71.livejournal.com
Sweet dreams dear. Maybe tonight Zeke will share in the beauty of Casey's dreams too.

Date: 2008-09-02 08:24 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
Thank you, addie! Wouldn't it be nice to follow them into their dreams?

Date: 2008-09-01 11:46 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] aprilkat.livejournal.com
Casey's confidence in their rightness is bold and sexy.

Date: 2008-09-02 08:24 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
Thank you, darling! And yes, they are both soooo sexy :-)

Date: 2008-09-02 12:00 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com
I know you
will stand
In the center of the
burning fire
With me.
The time will come
you'll know this too.


So beautiful, Juls. Your poems touch my heart.

Date: 2008-09-02 08:25 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
Your words mean so much to me, Julia. I can't thank you enough.

Date: 2008-09-02 12:22 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] tariana.livejournal.com
Such beauty.

Date: 2008-09-02 08:25 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
*hugs tight* Thank you, Tari.

Date: 2008-09-02 12:31 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com
To me imagination is like

breathing …


Oh, Casey! *hugs him up*!! Don't worry, Zeke will come to you, all breathless and in love!! :D

Date: 2008-09-02 08:26 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
Casey loves you hugs, do you know this? *smiles and hugs honey*

Date: 2008-09-02 12:35 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com
You made my Monday better hun XD

Date: 2008-09-02 08:26 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
That makes me glad, sweetie. How are you today?
*hugs tight*

Date: 2008-09-02 11:18 pm (UTC)From: (Anonymous)
I'm just fine sweetie!

Date: 2008-09-02 11:19 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com
I'm just fine sweetie!

Date: 2008-09-02 03:08 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] frolijah-fan-54.livejournal.com
I'm so glad I have Mondays off - at least usually. Hope your Monday wasn't too bad - *BIG HUGS*

You leave me speechless with your amazing poems - so packed with love and emotion and beauty. Casey's dreams are going to come true - and the reality will be even more beautiful than the dreams. *happy sigh*

Date: 2008-09-02 08:28 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
I hope you did enjoy your Monday, dear. Mine was so and so but it was ok. *biiiigest hugs back at YOU*

For Casey and Zeke their reality are like dreams, don't you think :-) *hugs you again*

Date: 2008-09-02 05:11 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] prisca1960.livejournal.com
ext_146521: (F-Case)
** sigh ** Oh Casey. Maybe Zeke will need a little bit more time, but he will get it soon. I'm sure he will! And then ...

Date: 2008-09-02 08:29 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
'And then... *sigh* Can't wait for "and then" *giggles*

Date: 2008-09-02 06:15 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm so sad to see Casey full of doubts like that. He won't have to dream anymore.

Your words are truly a gift. *kisses*

Date: 2008-09-02 08:29 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
You're such a dear, Shinta! Thank you soooo much!
*clings to you*

Date: 2008-09-02 07:21 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] aliensouldream.livejournal.com
I loved this in so many ways, with it's beautiful phrases, its bright-eyed hope.

My heart sees what’s invisible to my eyes.

Belief and instinct come first for Casey. He is not fooled for long by outward appearances but sees people's hearts.

To me imagination is like
breathing …


I couldn't help thinking of Casey's photography with the reference to pictures and Zeke's imagination being 'out of focus'. As if the imagination is a tool, a special lens through which the true nature of things can be seen.

Let your visions flow …
dare to dream…


You can feel the longing as he urges Zeke to believe in what they can become.

I don’t count my
innumerable deaths
when we say
good-bye.


What a mysterious phrase. Is it that every 'goodbye' is a little death, but not now he knows that none of those goodbyes is forever?

I know you
will stand
in the centre of the
burning fire.
With me.


This makes me think that they are preparing to face some challenge. The invasion? Or just the challenge of acknowledging how they feel?

I remember your trembling lips
soft and cool
gentle but demanding.
Didn’t you enjoy this one kiss?
Don’t let this first kiss be our last…
Please…


I wonder when they kissed - in the stress before the confrontation? Since? And why is Zeke now resisting what that implied? It's all a mystery but Casey's feelings are so clear and he has such a strong flame of hope.

Sometimes I’m so
stupidly happy
because of the beauty
of my dreams.


It is such a killer that at the end it seems that these are just his thoughts, the voice in his dreams, and that he has not yet shared these feelings with Zeke. I hope he does and Zeke can trust his dreams too.

Thank you, Julchen. Another lovely poem to dream on! *hugs*

Date: 2008-09-02 08:32 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
OMG! Sweetie! You make me blush and blush and blush...
I was so hoping it gives you something to think about and to dream on, it seems it worked :-)

"It is such a killer that at the end it seems that these are just his thoughts, the voice in his dreams..."

Dreams can be magical, right? Some dreams feel so true and some dreams even come true...
I think their time will come when they are dreaming together ...

like we do...
Thank you, sweetheart! *hugs back very tight and very long*

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