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This is for [livejournal.com profile] honeyandvinegar 
I'm thinking of you, honey!

Title: One of these days II
Pairing: C/Z
Rating: PG

It’s one of these days ..

An odd expression of

Joy.

Great sheets of rain.

Tears of happiness.

I’m back home again…

You’ll be back soon…

I put out the palms of my hands

To catch up the rain.

In the glow of the porch

The lighted rain is still…

Falling and falling

And falling.

 

Then I see you …

With your head down …

Smoking…

 

Then you see me

A look of such sadness …

Turns into

Release..

 

You start running…

Bodies collide …

Only arms

Only lips

Bodies of so many kisses.

 

Cracked voices

Only two words … names…

Show the strain

Of all it holds.

The rain repeats

Every single word

Of our bodies

Until we

Merge in …

Drinking us in...

Slow

Unspeakable.

 

Yes, Zeke. I missed you, too.

 

 

Date: 2008-11-02 04:34 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com
Oh, what a wonderful contrast this is to the first one. First the steady falling of the rain, then the light of joy when they see each other, and that wonderful embrace. Lovely.

Date: 2008-11-02 10:21 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
:-)) Thank you sooooo much, Julia! *smoochies*

Date: 2008-11-02 05:01 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] verangel.livejournal.com
Oh you did a part II!!! You couldn't leave us so sad. It is gorgeous and I loved how it seamlessly merged where you left off, only from Casey's POV. It was wonderful...truly gorgeous. xooxoxxo hugs v

Date: 2008-11-02 10:22 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
I couldn't leave you that sad, that's true :-))
I'm so happy you love it. Thank you for your lovely reply!
*clings*

Date: 2008-11-02 05:05 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] aliensouldream.livejournal.com
Ohhhhhh!! This is wonderful. The perfect sequel. So much intensity and emotion. I can just see this reunion in the rain. The raindrops merging with their wild kisses. It's perfect. Thank you so much, Julchen. *hugs*

Date: 2008-11-02 10:23 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
*phew* Thank you, sweetie! The first one was just too sad to leave you without the reunion :-))
*blows zillions of kisses to you*

Date: 2008-11-02 05:15 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] addie71.livejournal.com
This is such a beautiful reunion, I'm so glad we got to see it.

Date: 2008-11-02 10:23 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
I'm more than happy you like it, addie! I just HAD to do it :-))

Date: 2008-11-02 07:53 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com
Oh darling... this is so beautiful, and all for me?? You're a love and a half. God, I love you bunches. *hugs tight*!

Date: 2008-11-02 10:25 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
Awwww, you're simply a sweetheart ... Yes, it's yours, you can keep it if you want *giggles*
*biiiiiggest hugs back at YOU*

Date: 2008-11-02 09:16 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] prisca1960.livejournal.com
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Ohhh - wonderful! You couldn't leave Zeke so alone and sad.

Date: 2008-11-02 10:25 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
No, I just couldn't leave them so sad ... :-))
Thank you, honey!

Date: 2008-11-02 09:40 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] nimue-8.livejournal.com
What a beautiful picture!

Date: 2008-11-02 10:26 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
I'm glad you like it, my dear! :-)

Date: 2008-11-03 04:11 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com
You have the deepest words.

And that picture really got me. *swoons*

Date: 2008-11-03 06:30 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com
This is wonderful just amazing :)

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