for aliensouldream

[julchen11]

Aliensouldream posted this pic- it's very inspiring, isn't it?
She asked for a little gothic poem ... I gave it a try...
This is for you, dear!

Title: Stranger
Paring: C/Z
Rating: ??

 

I awoke to the cold gray twilight

seeping through

the closed blinds.

I decided to wait

for the darkness

because I don’t like the light.

I don’t like any kind of light.

 

The next time I awoke

it was in the dark of night.

Now it was time …

I tried to walk straight

but the thunder in my head

was beyond control.

 

There were you.

More illuminating than I could bear …

“Take care, little one,”

I growled to myself.

 

You looked concerned …

Innocent and shy.

“Do you believe in fate?” –

you asked.

 

“No, because I don’t like the fact

that my life is being controlled…”

Easy prey!

 

My voice became more hoarsely

“I wish your mother had told you

to stay away from strangers…”

 

You had no chance.

Good night, f-list! I hope you're doing as well as I do! Weekend and Froday is close!!!

Love and hugs,
Julchen .

Comments

[ladysnaps.livejournal.com]

what an awesome poem to go with that wonderful graphic!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much, lady! *huggles*

[frolijah-fan-54.livejournal.com]

What a haunting poem to go with that haunting pic - wonderful!!

You are such a master at this, dear Julchen - thanks so much for sharing this with us!! *BIG HUGS*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

You make me blush, sweetie! I'm more than happy you like it :-)
*hugs back very hard*

[mews1945.livejournal.com]

Ah, such a chilling poem. Perfect for that manip.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you, my dear! I'm glad it worked for you :-)

[addie71.livejournal.com]

So haunting and perfect!

I hope you have a lovely weekend.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thanks you much, addie! It seems to become a great weekend (hopefully).

Love and hugs,
Julchen

[honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com]

OOH! How delightfully, wonderfully dark! :O I LOVE it!!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Sometimes we just need a little darkness, right? You love it! *twirls you around*

[aprilkat.livejournal.com]

Gave me shivers!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

*hugs you very long*

[poplij.livejournal.com]

Oh wow, what a haunting poem and what a terrific picture. Love it !

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Wow! Thank you, sweetheart! I'm so glad you like it!!! *snugglehugs*

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

The poem was as wonderful as the picture.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much, Amy! *snuggles closer*

[prisca1960.livejournal.com]

Ui - this makes me shiver. Great poem! And a wonderful pic, too.
Have a nice weekend, Julchen!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you so so so much, prisca!
Have a lovely weekend yourself!!!
*mwwwwwah*

[i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com]

What a story! I love the last line. :)

*hugs*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Awwwww, you are so good to me, Shinta!
Thank you, darling!
*hugs back very tight*

[aliensouldream.livejournal.com]

*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEALS*

Oh, this is superb!!! Just the perfect gothic atmosphere, exactly what I was hoping for.

There were you.

More illuminating than I could bear …

What a fantastic phrase, and so revealing. An innocence more powerful than the light. And a predator more powerful than darkness. *trembles*

The 'cold gray twilight' and the 'thunder in my head' all add such a brooding tone. This is shivery good, dear Julchen, and sexily dark! A fateful stroll indeed! Who could resist such delicious prey? And a wonderful last line!

I love your take on this, dear! Thank you so much! *hugs and squeezes*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

I can hear you, sweetie, LOL! It was the first dark one for me EVER and I'm soooo happy you like it! Now you have me smile all over my face!
THANK YOU very much, my dear!

*hugs back more hard*

[frodosweetstuff.livejournal.com]

*shivers* Ooooh, poor Casey - although I'm wondering if he knew what he was in for - the question about fate somehow makes me think that he faced the danger because he saw something in Zeke... :)

Thank you! Very intriguing!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

maybe Casey knew how it would end...
Thank YOU, my dear.