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elderberrywine You gave me the words: fire, crunch, tender, mittens, drifts, Sam
So this is for you, sweetie!
Title: Winter ... games?
Pairing: F/S
Rating: G
Backed against
the soaked cushioned arm
of Bilbo’s old chair
behind the tool shed…
snow and ice crunching under
their restless feet…
like they are walking
on fire…
Mittens like fluffy
white towels against
his back …
Sam drifts away…
Tender touches
burning holes
with hot fingertips
everywhere.
Coldness and heat…
Shadows and light …
Ashes and fire…
overpowering release
In the depth of winter
Sam finally learns
there is in him and
in Frodo
an everlasting summer.
Love and lots of hugs,
Julchen .
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Date: 2008-11-28 11:51 pm (UTC)From:an everlasting summer.
that's an amazing line. i love the idea of an everlasting summer.
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Date: 2008-11-30 12:26 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-11-28 11:52 pm (UTC)From:Beautiful. Your poems are so full of emotion and lovely images.
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Date: 2008-11-30 12:26 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-11-29 12:08 am (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-11-30 12:27 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-11-29 12:59 am (UTC)From:in Frodo
an everlasting summer.
Oh that's so lovely and warming!
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Date: 2008-11-30 12:27 pm (UTC)From:Thank you, dear Belle!
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Date: 2008-11-29 01:29 am (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-11-30 12:28 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-11-29 02:21 am (UTC)From:But I got back just in time for this gorgeous piece. I love the sense of movement -
snow and ice crunching under
their restless feet…
the tiniest bit of hesitancy? shyness? from Sam, and Frodo's sure persistence -
Sam drifts away…
Tender touches
burning holes
with hot fingertips
everywhere.
And that lovely melting ending -
In the depth of winter
Sam finally learns
there is in him and
in Frodo
an everlasting summer.
Just so beautiful! Thank you very much - *happy hugs back*
EBWine
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Date: 2008-11-30 12:30 pm (UTC)From:Maybe - listening to their restless feet - they aren't that shy ... in the heat of the moment *smiles at you*
*hugs you madly*
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Date: 2008-11-29 07:50 am (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-11-30 12:30 pm (UTC)From:no subject
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Date: 2008-11-30 12:31 pm (UTC)From:*hugs you tight*
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Date: 2008-11-29 02:48 pm (UTC)From:no subject
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Date: 2008-11-29 08:53 pm (UTC)From:*adopts as winter favorite for life*
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Date: 2008-11-30 12:32 pm (UTC)From:*adopts as winter favorite for life*
I don't know what to say, sweetie. THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!
*hugs very very tight*
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Date: 2008-11-30 04:31 am (UTC)From:The last line sings.
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Date: 2008-11-30 12:33 pm (UTC)From:*stares at your icon, wow...*
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Date: 2008-11-30 09:53 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-12-02 08:44 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-12-01 10:48 pm (UTC)From:I especially love these lines:
"Tender touches
burning holes
with hot fingertips"
So powerful and effective!
*hugs*
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Date: 2008-12-02 08:46 pm (UTC)From:*hugs back tight*
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Date: 2008-12-02 06:44 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-12-02 08:47 pm (UTC)From: