6 words for elderberrywine

[julchen11]

This is for my dear friend elderberrywine 
You gave me the words: fire, crunch, tender, mittens, drifts, Sam
So this is for you, sweetie!

Title: Winter ... games?
Pairing: F/S
Rating: G

Backed against

the soaked cushioned arm

of Bilbo’s old chair

behind the tool shed…

snow and ice crunching under

their restless feet…

like they are walking

on fire…

Mittens like fluffy

white towels against

his back …

Sam drifts away…

Tender touches

burning holes

with hot fingertips

everywhere.

Coldness and heat…

Shadows and light …

Ashes and fire…

overpowering release

 

In the depth of winter

Sam finally learns

there is in him and

in Frodo

an everlasting summer.

Love and lots of hugs,
Julchen .

Comments

[earth-dragon.livejournal.com]

In the depth of winter Sam finally learns there is in him and in Frodo
an everlasting summer.

that's an amazing line. i love the idea of an everlasting summer.

[mews1945.livejournal.com]

"an everlasting summer."

Beautiful. Your poems are so full of emotion and lovely images.

[shirebound]

Ooooh, "everlasting summer". *happy sigh*

[belleferret.livejournal.com]

there is in him and
in Frodo
an everlasting summer.

Oh that's so lovely and warming!

[addie71.livejournal.com]

So beautiful. Like everyone else, I love the last line.

[elderberrywine.livejournal.com]

Oh, my!!!! I've been away for a few days -no internets! :(

But I got back just in time for this gorgeous piece. I love the sense of movement -

snow and ice crunching under

their restless feet…

the tiniest bit of hesitancy? shyness? from Sam, and Frodo's sure persistence -

Sam drifts away…

Tender touches

burning holes

with hot fingertips

everywhere.

And that lovely melting ending -

In the depth of winter

Sam finally learns

there is in him and

in Frodo

an everlasting summer.

Just so beautiful! Thank you very much - *happy hugs back*

EBWine

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

WOW! Thank you and the last line was perfect.

[i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com]

Ooohh, yes! It's hot! :D

[cali-se.livejournal.com]

How lovely, Julchen!

[aliensouldream.livejournal.com]

That's so stunning. The final stanza is just ... utterly gorgeous. And sums up these two perfectly.

*adopts as winter favorite for life*

[annwyn55.livejournal.com]

Oh - this is beautiful...

The last line sings.

[teresarosewood.livejournal.com]

This was soo lovely! And yes I would imagine that Frodo/Sam have lots of heat between them. :)

[melyanna-65.livejournal.com]

Another great poems of yours, dear!

I especially love these lines:

"Tender touches

burning holes

with hot fingertips"

So powerful and effective!

*hugs*

[honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com]

Ooooooh, the heat of it! :D It WAS a hot lil' number, this here! Wonderful again, sugar!!