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My dear friend [livejournal.com profile] earth_dragon  gave me these words:
eyes, faith, air, fire, water, earth.
Great words!

So this is for you, sweetie:

Title: "Elements"
Pairing: F/S
Rating: PG


Dip your fingers in earth –

one by one …

Smell your hands, my dear…

It will remind you on our

Beloved Shire.

 

Let me wrap you in … air

Holding you means

Sorrows melt away.

Be held by you means

Faith and when you kiss me

Those kisses bring back

Warmth of a breathing fire, never ending…

 

Tears form pools of pearls in your eyes,

Tears I kiss away from your face…

Tears splashing like a sigh

on your skin ..

Flooded heartbeats…

Fusion…

Whispering your name

to your creamy skin

pale as moonlight …

 

Water, Fire, Air and Earth …
What more could I desire …

Beyond reach of all understanding…

I want to tell you …

This  is what you are to me,

Frodo.

No matter what.


Thank you, lovey!

Date: 2008-11-30 09:37 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] verangel.livejournal.com
This is gorgeous and the picture so beautiful. You are amazing. hugs xooxo v

Date: 2008-11-30 09:39 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] aliensouldream.livejournal.com
Thank you for this series of beautiful poems, Julchen. I'm always in awe of what you can do with a few simple words. This is exactly how I imagine Sam might see Frodo. As he is a lover of the elements, it such a deep meaning.

Flooded heartbeats…

Fusion…

Whispering your name

to your creamy skin

pale as moonlight …


Mystical and lovely.

Date: 2008-11-30 10:53 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com
That's so mystical and delicate, it feels like the elements all swirling about each other.

Date: 2008-11-30 11:33 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] fordsflappers.livejournal.com
Lovely poem.

Date: 2008-11-30 11:48 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] melanieathene.livejournal.com
Oh, that's lovely, Julchen. I always said you had the soul of a poet. You have the words and talent too. :)

Date: 2008-12-01 12:52 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] addie71.livejournal.com
Beautiful, Julchen. So perfect for Frodo and Sam.

That picture is gorgeous.

Date: 2008-12-01 03:38 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] earth-dragon.livejournal.com
AAAAAAIIIIIIIIEEEEEE!!!!! *primal scream*

that is so gorgeous! so, so gorgeous! thank you so much, sweetie!

*great big huge giant hugs*

Date: 2008-12-02 09:23 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
YAY! You like it!!!! That's soooooo wonderful. I'm so glad to hear this! It's so encouraging, you can't imagine how much!
Llllllove and biggest hugs back at you,
Julchen

Date: 2008-12-01 05:06 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com
You are the best poet hun *hugs*

Date: 2008-12-03 05:23 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
No, sweetie. All I try is to bring words in the right order :-)
Thank you, dear heart! *hugs back*
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Date: 2008-12-03 05:24 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
Wow! Thank you, dearie! You left ME speechless!

Date: 2008-12-01 04:56 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com
You're simply amazing to come up with something wonderful to connect words.

*kisses*

Date: 2008-12-03 05:22 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
Awww, thank you, darling! *kisses you right back*

Date: 2008-12-02 06:48 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com
Tears form pools of pearls in your eyes,

Tears I kiss away from your face…


How do you do that? I think that's the first time I've ever heard tears described like that. It's perfect and beautiful. *hug n' hug again*!

Date: 2008-12-02 09:22 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com
You're such a darling! You make me weep (a little) ... good tears of course.
Thank you, lovey! *clings*

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