6 words for claudia

[julchen11]

My dear friend claudia603   gave me these 6 words:
crystal, pearly, crisp, elaborate, wistful, heart

So this is for you, sweetheart:

Title: "King"
Pairing: Aragorn/Frodo
Rating: PG

The Earth told me last night

what I feel –

what you feel…

Your eyes pearly pools …

reflecting the total sky.

The wistful frame is broken –

broken by hopes and faith.

The version of heaven

crystal clear as window glass …

The window to my soul

is opened

to let in crisp air …

A pretty little background

elaborated by you, little one.

The clouds of sorrow

that weight my heart …

gone.

You survived.

You’re alive.

The torch now holds the flame of

my beating heart.

 

You are more king

than I ever will be.

Have a marvelous day, my friends. .

Comments

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

Wow so powerful and beautiful! *hugs*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thanks, sweetie! *hugs back*

[addie71.livejournal.com]

So beautiful. You are amazing.

I hope you are having a marvelous day too, my dear.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you, addie. You're such a dear!

[shirebound]

This is one of your best, Julchen. Very powerful.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

I don't know what to say but THANK YOU! *blushes*

[claudia603.livejournal.com]

awww...*melts into a puddle of goo* I'm so honored to have my very own poem! Thankyou thank you!! That was gorgeous!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

YAY! You like it! Thank you, sweetheart!

[withywindle01.livejournal.com]

Oooo...F/A! This is beautiful, my dear!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

It's the only F/S so far. I'm so glad it worked for you, my dear! Thank you!

[honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com]

Good GOD. Once again, I'm just sitting here, staring into the screen, loving your words. I'm eating 'em up today--I'd missed so many delectable delights!!

You are more king
Than I will ever be.

Perfect. Absolutely perfect. :D!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Woah! You make me fly, honey. Thank you for your lovingly words, they mean soooo much to me!

Love and kisses,
Julchen

[aliensouldream.livejournal.com]

You make magic with these words!

Your eyes pearly pools …

reflecting the total sky.

The wistful frame is broken –

broken by hopes and faith.


The meter is like a song. Kingly and wistful - a perfect evocation of Aragorn.

*hugs*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much, dear heart. I don't know what else to say... you make me blush.
*hugs back*

[frolijah-fan-54.livejournal.com]

Dearest Julchen - you have a way with words that is truly amazing!!

That last line is so profound - and so true. This is very powerful - and that pic of Frodo (EYELASHES!!) is so beautiful. Your words do that picture proud. *hugs*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Good god, I'm at a loss for words. THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH! *hugs back*