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JudithK ([personal profile] julchen11) wrote2008-12-03 10:37 pm
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6 words for honeyandvinegar



My dearest honey gave me these 6 words:
Soda (what a word! phew!), pinch, meaning, hilarious, fingertips, brush

So here it is, honey.  This one is for YOU:

Title: "Feelings"
Pairing: C/Z
Rating: ??

Fingertips

touch in the darkness…

tracing lines

of emotions.

Lips brushing lips slightly

while you dribble

Soda

across my body…

mixed with a pinch

of sweet red wine…

to be

hilariously

lapped up by

your eager tongue

 

Can you see

what I see,

Casey?

Can you feel
what I feel?

 

I’ll take you to a place

you’ve never seen before…

 

I’m still there.

 

This night

my reflection

reached out

to touch

the glass –

shattering this so far

virtual reality…

 

I’ve found the truth

with just one look -

magic and wonder

has a special meaning

now…

each moment

with you
...
flying fantasy

in

never ending
eternity.
 

Thank you for everything, sweetie!

Love and hugs,
Julchen


[identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com 2008-12-03 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Magic and wonder are very good words to describe this poem. It's like flying.

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 07:08 pm (UTC)(link)
You made me smile, sweetie! I'm glad you like it :-)
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[identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com 2008-12-04 12:49 am (UTC)(link)
Yum...your poems are always so magical!

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 07:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow! I don't know what to say, dearest! Thank you soooo much!

[identity profile] addie71.livejournal.com 2008-12-04 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
Delightful!
magic and wonder
has a special meaning
now…
Soda! Very well done!

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I think Soda was the hardest word so far :-))
I'm glad it worked for you, my dear!
Thank you!

[identity profile] frolijah-fan-54.livejournal.com 2008-12-04 02:56 am (UTC)(link)
Another amazing poem - you are an absolute wonder!!

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 07:15 pm (UTC)(link)
*blushes* Wow! I don't know what to say, sweetie! You're simply a darling *happy sigh*
Thank you soooo much!
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[identity profile] sayhello.livejournal.com 2008-12-04 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, that's such a beautiful painting!

Hewene

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
I always loved this painting :-)

[identity profile] i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com 2008-12-04 07:37 am (UTC)(link)
Rrrrrrrrrrrr

Lapping up soda, hmm?

:D

Mwah!

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
*giggles*

[identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com 2008-12-04 08:20 am (UTC)(link)
I loved every word in this poem

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 07:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, sweetie!
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[identity profile] prisca1960.livejournal.com 2008-12-04 11:23 pm (UTC)(link)
;) Zugegeben, ich war neugierig, was du aus den vorgegeben Worten machst. Hast du toll gemacht!

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2008-12-05 11:47 am (UTC)(link)
Dankeschön! Ich freue mich, dass es dir gefällt :-)

[identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com 2008-12-11 09:46 pm (UTC)(link)
OHHH *HOW* did I MISS THIS?? Good lord, honeypot... *hugs*!

It's wonderful. I could see that geeky lil' man pouring soda on his lover, heeheehee!! It's fantastic... a 'flying fantasy' is right! *GLOMP*!

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2008-12-16 05:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwww,thank you so much, honey! I'm more than happy you like it, though 'Soda' was a hard nut to crack!
*hugs back tight*

[identity profile] aliensouldream.livejournal.com 2008-12-14 08:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, I missed this! Slowly catching up from Mews's lists.

What a great image of Casey dribbling wine and soda on Zeke's heated body *faints* They've truly found a fantastical place.

I’ve found the truth

with just one look -

magic and wonder

has a special meaning

now…

each moment

with you



How do you do it with such different words?

*hugs like crazy*

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2008-12-16 05:08 pm (UTC)(link)
*blushes*
The words are there and sometimes I just have to look at them ... though the 'Soda'word wasn't that easy at first :-)
*hugs you madly*
Thanks a lot, dear heart! I'm sooooo glad you like it!