Good morning

[julchen11]

I'm at home for another week but it's ok.
Time for something good ...I'm writing again (it seems my muse is coming back) but I tried something
different.

Today I like it dark so I gave it a try... Hope you'll enjoy

Title: Heaven and Hell
Pairing: C/Z
Rating: ?

Darkness all around me…

No one else around…

Only misery…

Why don’t you realize

I’m your pain,

I’m your weakness…

Nightmares

Hidden shadows

Held back tears…

It’s hard to face …

The guilt I feel inside…

 

Midnight.

Moonshine…

These moments I live!

Inside you.

In your dreams…

 

I curl around the tangled folds

of weirdness…

I curl my body into a ball…

Lifeless…

I’m trapped between

Heaven and hell.

 

But then you are here.

Tonight you need to go it

slow…

No chance, Zeke…

 

Passion…

Obsession…

Your words are haunting me…

Blowing through me…

Inspiring my hands…

Exploring your luminous body…

Merciless…

Fingers like dancing pleasures…

Drinking in your silent caress…

Inhaling you…

A surging tongue

Almost trembling…

Tracing a wet line at your damp belly…

Gasping sounds…

Gentle lips deepen …

Fiercely cries…

Desperate moans…

Drenched in ecstasy…

 

Vibrating hearts…

Eternity breaks through time…

Present and past…

Intermingle

You ask me
"who are you?…

Lucifer’s pride …

Devil or angel?

 

You don’t want to know it all, Zeke…

Just be…

warned.

Comments

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

Passion…

Obsession…

Your words are haunting me…

Blowing through me…

Inspiring my hands…

Exploring your luminous body…



This was so scorching and powerful! I enjoyed this so much hun! Good night I'm off to bed now.

[prisca1960.livejournal.com]

Wow ... this is .. just wow!
Great poem, Julchen. Yes, I really like it!

[lisabellex.livejournal.com]

*quotes every single line*

This is gorgeous. You've painted such a beautiful picture - it's alive with rich description and emotion. And I love the photograph.

Thank you for this!

*hugs you*

:D

[addie71.livejournal.com]

This is dark. And haunting. Beautiful, Julchen.

I hope your not home because you are still sick? *hugs*

[bellewood.livejournal.com]

Beeeeeautiful picture to go with your lovely haunting words.. *hugs*

[honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com]

Oooh hoo hoo hooooo! Casey, the little devil-boy! *tucks his black-feathered wings behind his back and straightens his fake halo*! That's it, Zeke... just a little closer... clooooser...

I'm giggling ebully! I love it. :D!!

[mews1945.livejournal.com]

This is incredibly beautiful, all the words blending into a darkly gorgeous picture of passion.

[not-alone.livejournal.com]

That pic never fails to set my heart racing - it's so incredibly beautiful - as are your words:)

[periantari.livejournal.com]

ooo what a pic! thanks for posting it! Miss you, dear! =)

[aredhelebenesse.livejournal.com]

Aw, you are such a great and talented writer! It's so beautiful!

Now I hope you are not sick again, but only enjoy your well-deserved holidays at home!

*big hus to you*

[verangel.livejournal.com]

I got this surge in my chest as this kept going.
A holding of breath kinda thing almost. It was so intense...and then oh that end was wicked. *shivers* This was gorgeous and the picture you used was one of his most incredible. I am glad you are definitly spunking up. Hugs you so close xoxoxo v

[babydracky.livejournal.com]

*sighs*
How can you write so beautifuly?
There is no other words. This is really beautiful.
A powerful poetry.

[aliensouldream.livejournal.com]

Holy smoke! I'm stunned. What a rich, evocative and deliciously dark piece. I was utterly delighted by this. And so surprised to find it was Casey's POV. Although that pic of him is jaw-droppingly beautiful, it does have a dark edginess.

But the word-smithery on offer here is superb.

Passion…
Obsession…
Your words are haunting me…
Blowing through me…
Inspiring my hands…
Exploring your luminous body…

It's unfair to quote one part, the whole thing is rich and powerful.

I'm loving your muse! *kiss for muse*