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JudithK ([personal profile] julchen11) wrote2009-02-03 08:32 am
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Good morning



I'm at home for another week but it's ok.
Time for something good ...I'm writing again (it seems my muse is coming back) but I tried something
different.

Today I like it dark so I gave it a try... Hope you'll enjoy

Title: Heaven and Hell
Pairing: C/Z
Rating: ?

Darkness all around me…

No one else around…

Only misery…

Why don’t you realize

I’m your pain,

I’m your weakness…

Nightmares

Hidden shadows

Held back tears…

It’s hard to face …

The guilt I feel inside…

 

Midnight.

Moonshine…

These moments I live!

Inside you.

In your dreams…

 

I curl around the tangled folds

of weirdness…

I curl my body into a ball…

Lifeless…

I’m trapped between

Heaven and hell.

 

But then you are here.

Tonight you need to go it

slow…

No chance, Zeke…

 

Passion…

Obsession…

Your words are haunting me…

Blowing through me…

Inspiring my hands…

Exploring your luminous body…

Merciless…

Fingers like dancing pleasures…

Drinking in your silent caress…

Inhaling you…

A surging tongue

Almost trembling…

Tracing a wet line at your damp belly…

Gasping sounds…

Gentle lips deepen …

Fiercely cries…

Desperate moans…

Drenched in ecstasy…

 

Vibrating hearts…

Eternity breaks through time…

Present and past…

Intermingle

You ask me
"who are you?…

Lucifer’s pride …

Devil or angel?

 

You don’t want to know it all, Zeke…

Just be…

warned.

[identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com 2009-02-03 08:55 am (UTC)(link)
Passion…

Obsession…

Your words are haunting me…

Blowing through me…

Inspiring my hands…

Exploring your luminous body…



This was so scorching and powerful! I enjoyed this so much hun! Good night I'm off to bed now.

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 10:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, my dear. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
*hugs tight*
ext_146521: (F-Zeke brown Schatten)

[identity profile] prisca1960.livejournal.com 2009-02-03 09:39 am (UTC)(link)
Wow ... this is .. just wow!
Great poem, Julchen. Yes, I really like it!

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 10:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Now it's me "wow-ing" :-)
Thank you, sweetheart! I'm glad you like it!

[identity profile] lisabellex.livejournal.com 2009-02-03 10:11 am (UTC)(link)
*quotes every single line*

This is gorgeous. You've painted such a beautiful picture - it's alive with rich description and emotion. And I love the photograph.

Thank you for this!

*hugs you*

:D

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 10:41 pm (UTC)(link)
You make me blush, lisa! And smile a very huuuuge smile!
I'm glad it worked for you. Isn't he a beauty?
*hugs you back*

[identity profile] addie71.livejournal.com 2009-02-03 10:45 am (UTC)(link)
This is dark. And haunting. Beautiful, Julchen.

I hope your not home because you are still sick? *hugs*
Edited 2009-02-03 10:46 (UTC)

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 10:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, dearie!
I'm still ath home this week but I'm feeling much much better :-)
Your hugs work wonders! *hugs YOU again*

[identity profile] bellewood.livejournal.com 2009-02-03 12:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Beeeeeautiful picture to go with your lovely haunting words.. *hugs*

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 10:43 pm (UTC)(link)
He always makes us dream, doesn't he? Thank you for your lovingly words, my dear!
*hugs back*

[identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com 2009-02-03 03:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh hoo hoo hooooo! Casey, the little devil-boy! *tucks his black-feathered wings behind his back and straightens his fake halo*! That's it, Zeke... just a little closer... clooooser...

I'm giggling ebully! I love it. :D!!

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 10:44 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL! You're such a dear, sunshine!

*tucks his black-feathered wings behind his back and straightens his fake halo*!

Where the heck is THAT PHOTO?????
You know ..the one with the cloooooser!!!

I'm so happy you like it, honey!
Thank you!

[identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com 2009-02-05 03:34 am (UTC)(link)
I DON'T KNOW! I think they were being so HAWT that the film melted! ARGH!!!

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-05 02:16 pm (UTC)(link)
You could be right, but this wouldn't surprise us, right?

[identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com 2009-02-03 03:19 pm (UTC)(link)
This is incredibly beautiful, all the words blending into a darkly gorgeous picture of passion.

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 10:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, dear heart! I'm glad it worked for you :-)

[identity profile] not-alone.livejournal.com 2009-02-03 05:46 pm (UTC)(link)
That pic never fails to set my heart racing - it's so incredibly beautiful - as are your words:)

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 10:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Believe me dear, I could sit and stare at this picture for HOURS!
Thank you for your lovingly words.
*hugs*

[identity profile] periantari.livejournal.com 2009-02-03 05:53 pm (UTC)(link)
ooo what a pic! thanks for posting it! Miss you, dear! =)

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 10:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Miss you too, lovey! *hugs tight*

[identity profile] aredhelebenesse.livejournal.com 2009-02-03 08:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, you are such a great and talented writer! It's so beautiful!

Now I hope you are not sick again, but only enjoy your well-deserved holidays at home!

*big hus to you*

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 10:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwwww, danke meine Süße! ich freue mich, dass es dir gefällt (auch wenn Zeke nicht ganz so dein Ding ist *grins*).
Ich bin diese Woche noch krank geschrieben aber es geht mir schon viiiiel besser und so langsam kann ich auch meine 99 Stufen von der Wohnung in den Keller wieder erklimmen und ich genieße es wieder auf den Beinen zu sein!
*dicke fette Knuddelzz zurück an dich*

[identity profile] aredhelebenesse.livejournal.com 2009-02-05 11:30 am (UTC)(link)
Echt?! Mensch, ich wünsch Dir, dass Du ganz bald wieder völlig hergestellt bist. Bei Dir weiß man ja nie so genau wie schlimm es wirklich ist, da Du immer einen Grund zum Jubeln findest. *Dich mal ganz dolle drückt* Aber mute Dir auf jeden Fall am Anfang nicht zu viel zu! Sowas kann leicht schief gehen.

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-05 02:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Dankeschön!!! ich bin ganz vorsichtig, versprochen! *Finger kreuz*

[identity profile] verangel.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
I got this surge in my chest as this kept going.
A holding of breath kinda thing almost. It was so intense...and then oh that end was wicked. *shivers* This was gorgeous and the picture you used was one of his most incredible. I am glad you are definitly spunking up. Hugs you so close xoxoxo v

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 10:49 pm (UTC)(link)
You are soooo good to me, angel! I'm more than happy you like it, you don't know how much your words mean to me! This picture will always be one of my favorites, no doubt. He's such a cutie, isn't he?
*leans on you and snuggles closer*

[identity profile] verangel.livejournal.com 2009-02-05 03:39 am (UTC)(link)
YOU are the snuggly. I could easily fall into you for comfort in person. xoxoxo v

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-05 02:12 pm (UTC)(link)
I always knew (and believe) angels are among us *points to you*

[identity profile] babydracky.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 10:26 am (UTC)(link)
*sighs*
How can you write so beautifuly?
There is no other words. This is really beautiful.
A powerful poetry.

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
You make me blush, sweetie! I don't know what to say but THANK YOU, darling!
*hugs you very tight*

Your icon is incredibly beautiful *sighs*

[identity profile] babydracky.livejournal.com 2009-02-05 11:07 am (UTC)(link)
But you do know I'm honest.
*cuddles*

ÖÖ A cuttie, isn't he?

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-05 02:14 pm (UTC)(link)
I think I never saw a single picture that didn't show him sweet and beautiful :-)
*snugglehugs*

[identity profile] babydracky.livejournal.com 2009-02-05 02:34 pm (UTC)(link)
He definitely IS.

[identity profile] aliensouldream.livejournal.com 2009-02-06 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Holy smoke! I'm stunned. What a rich, evocative and deliciously dark piece. I was utterly delighted by this. And so surprised to find it was Casey's POV. Although that pic of him is jaw-droppingly beautiful, it does have a dark edginess.

But the word-smithery on offer here is superb.

Passion…
Obsession…
Your words are haunting me…
Blowing through me…
Inspiring my hands…
Exploring your luminous body…


It's unfair to quote one part, the whole thing is rich and powerful.

I'm loving your muse! *kiss for muse*

[identity profile] julchen11.livejournal.com 2009-02-10 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL! Sometimes a little darkness isn't THAT wrong, is it? When I started I didn't know who is talking, I was - like you - surprised that it turned to be Casey :-)
This picture it's a little bit mysterious... somehow...

My muse is very happy you love it! *muse kisses back*
*Julchen hugs you tight*

Thank you, sunshine! With all those lovely comments it isn't possible to stop ...
So be warned... seriously!