inspired by Rakshi

[julchen11]

Last night I read  rakshi 's story for the waymeet challenge and it grabbed me ...
You can find it here: http://community.livejournal.com/waymeet/114060.html

It made me think ... and I just HAD to write a little ...
Thank you, lovey. You know how much I love your story, don't you?

Title: The Key
Pairing: S/E
Rating: PG

„The Key“

 

My heart has many doors.

You unlock them

day by day

one after the other

with your patience

with your trust

 

And I

didn’t notice it

far too long.

 

But you do it

anyway.

Constantly.

 

I didn’t realize

it was me

handing you

the key

to my heart

the very first  moment

we met.

 

I’m glad I did.

I’m glad you know

how to use the key

and not

using me.

 

It must be

love, Elijah.

 

Love,
Julchen .

Comments

[withywindle01.livejournal.com]

This is really beautiful.

I didn’t realize

it was me

handing you

the key

to my heart

the very first moment

we met. *sighs*

Rakshi's story was great, wasn't it? Clever format.

[rakshi.livejournal.com]

I am thrilled to the core of my soul that my story inspired such a touching and intimate look into Sean's heart. I LOVE this poem and will treasure it always... just as I treasure your friendship.

Love....

[mews1945.livejournal.com]

This is lovely. Keys figure into their lives in many ways.

[shirebound]

I didn’t realize
it was me
handing you
the key
to my heart
the very first moment
we met.

That's lovely.

[babydracky.livejournal.com]

Wait??? OO
Haven't you already posted that one? OO Am I driving crazy? OO
It is a soooooo beautiful text and I like it a lot!♥
And I know it couldn't be a dream... I already read it OO

[grey-wonderer.livejournal.com]

Ooooooooooo, I like that! Beautiful!

[romeny.livejournal.com]

I read Rakshi's fic too; how lovely that inspired your poem.

[addie71.livejournal.com]

That's lovely, Julchen.