Zum Geburtstag!!!

[julchen11]

Happy Birthday dear frodosweetstuff

Thank you so much for all you have done for us, keeping the fandoms alive.
I hope you'll have a joyfull day with family and friends, filled with love and laughter, sunshine and ... hobbits.

Here's a little something for you. Thanks to my dear friend  bellewoodfor the beta! 

Title: the Forbidden Kiss
Paring: S/E
Rating: G 

The forbidden kiss

 

In my dreams

your silhouette approaches in the midnight hour.

Frightened yet excited...

drawing closer...

Closer you take me ...

into your body

into your soul

Longing for the kiss...

the forbidden kiss...

Gazing at your lips with astonishment

as if hypnotized

drawing nearer... closer...

longing for them to meet mine

Seeking to drink them in

This kiss....

Tasting the taste of beer and wine

so bittersweet

on your lips

I can smell the scent of your skin

teasing me...

to touch you...

I can hear the need in your voice

drawing me in...

Those lips ... always haunting me

 

This kiss...

the forbidden kiss...

this means longing for me ...

only in my dreams ... knowing... hoping

Forever will be forbidden. 


Lots of love and big tight hugs, 
Julchen

Comments

[frodosweetstuff.livejournal.com]

Oooooh Julchen, you wrote poetry for me!!!!!! And this is soooo moving - I can feel the urge and longing and then the sad knowledge of this dream bing forbidden.

*hugs and twirls you* Thank you so very very much! I'll be back when I'm a bit more coherent. I'm totally shocked in a good way!!!! :)

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you like it, sweetheart. I can tell you, I was sooo nervous it wouldn't to you justice. And now my heart is beating again - I died more than 1000 deaths tonight.
Have a fantastic day, my dear!
May the coming year be full of all the things you love, especially full of Elijah-Sean-Frodo-Sam-Casey-Zeke-goodness!

*hugs you madly*

[frodosweetstuff.livejournal.com]

So, jetzt hab ich auch endlich Zeit, was zu Deiner schönen Geburtstagskarte zu sagen! Das war ja fast eine komplette Slashgeschichte!!! Aber erst mal was zum Äußeren: Die Karte war schön, deine Handschrift auch und die drei kleinen Punkte auf allen Is machten es so richtig schön hobbitig! Und dann die schöne Reise, auf die Du mich mitgenommen hast. Ahhhhhhhhh!!! Was soll ich sagen - Lavendel, Rosen, Heuboden, Frodo und Sam und dann auch noch Sean und Elijah - und Elijahs Haut ist tatsächlich sooooo weich und Seans Brusthaare sind sehr... nun ja... da gibt es wohl kein Adjektiv für! Zumindest sind sie mit Elijahs Wimper in einem kleinen Glasfläschchen - nun ja, einer Phiole. Der von Galadriel... hach, da passen ja alle Geschenke so richtig schön zusammen!!!!!

Vielen vielen vielen Dank für die tolle Karte und den klasse Inhalt (und die Samen - seed, uh-oh, ich versuche mal, nichts anzügliches zu denken - sind auch toll!!!).

*knuddel*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Ich weiß gar nicht, was ich sagen soll. 1000 DANK für dieses liebevolle Feedback. Ich freu mich,dass es dich gefreut hat.

*zurückknuddel*

[mews1945.livejournal.com]

This is really wonderful, Juls. It's tender and longing and sad, and it feels a little dangerous too. Lucky Stef.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you, dear. I'm so relieved it works for you.

Love,
Julchen

[belleferret.livejournal.com]

Oh Julchen this is quite sensual and full of longing and need. Poor boys.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you, sweetie! I was so nervous posting it, I'm so happy you like it.

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

OMG! Julchen I love this and you so much you are brilliant :)

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you, dearest. You make me smile, I'm so glad you like it.

[tariana.livejournal.com]

Beautiful, Julchen!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much, Tari!

[withywindle01.livejournal.com]

Oh, my dear...this is *gorgeous*!! *big sigh*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you, sweetheart. My hands are still trembling, I was so nervous it wouldn't be good enough for this special lady. I'm so happy you like it, too!

Love,
Julchen

[withywindle01.livejournal.com]

I don't think you ever need be nervous about your poetry being good enough.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

*sighs relieved* Thank you again, sweetheart.

[addie71.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is so lovely, Julchen.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you, addie. I'm so glad you like it.

Love,
Julchen

[mother2012.livejournal.com]

Hey! Real poetry. There are few who can actually write it, you know. This is very good.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Real poetry? Thank you so much, Taro. I wasn't sure it would work, I'm so glad you like it.

[aprilkat.livejournal.com]

Oh, what longing - so sensual and so sad.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you, lovey, thank you soooo much. *happy sigh*

[ink-gypsy.livejournal.com]

Julchen, this evokes so many emotions. It's just beautiful.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you, Michele. Your words mean so much to me.
I was so very nervous posting it. I'm happy you like it.

Love,
Julchen

[poplij.livejournal.com]

Julcen, this is lovely. S/E doesn't work for me don't hit me !, I had someone else in mind when I've read your poem though.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much, my dear. I didn't mention the names, honey. It depends on you who's in your mind :-))

[aliensouldream.livejournal.com]

Dear Julchen, this is beautiful! I sort of heard it in Frodo's voice, I hope that's alright :-) I think it was the line 'beer and wine' that sounded hobbity somehow. But it's wonderful and the 'only in dreams' bit is very powerful. A lovely gift and one that sums up a special face of fandom I think.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

I didn't mention the names, my dear. It depends on you who is speaking :-))
Thank you soooo much for your lovely comment, it means a lot to me. you made me smile AND blush!

[i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com]

Always, always so beautiful.

And I can feel them.

*squishes*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

I'm soooo glad you like it, Shinta! Thank you, my dear.
*dances around like madly and twirls you with me*

[telstar-gold.livejournal.com]

Lovely. And I hope it won't be forbidden forever...! :)

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you, telstar! We will see what's going on ... I'm hopeful that sometimes ...
*starts dreaming with you*

[honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com]

Ooooh, honey! How spectacular! I love the way you write. "The taste of beer and wine", so realistic and a true part of things! Does that make sense? I'm kinda in la-la-land today! :P

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

It works for you!!! YAY!!! I'm so thrilled and glad you like it. Spectacular? OMGOMGOMG!
Thank you, sweet love. Your words are very encouraging,mayyyyybe I should try writing something more
*clings to you*

[melyanna-65.livejournal.com]

You have such a poetic soul, my dear! And this one is so bittersweet and hot!

Thanks for sharing, hon!

*hugs*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

_Awww, you're so good to me. I'm happy you like it, Mel.

*hugs back gently*

[ex-lbilover.livejournal.com]

Oh Julchen, this is gorgeous! How powerful and moving and filled with yearning. Thank you so much. *hugs*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

I'm sooooo glad you like it, sweetie. It means a lot to me and I'm sure you know it.
*hugs back tight*

[bellewood.livejournal.com]

Heheh.. see?? i told you it was wonderful... all these lovely comments prove my point! Well done sweetie.. it's so beautiful and sensuous and sweet.. and it could apply to anyone at all ;) *hugs*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

I'm soooo happy, dear. Thank you ever so much!I'm glad it works for you.

Love and kisses,
Julchen

[frolijah-fan-54.livejournal.com]

Oh, Julchen - this is so haunting and lovely all at the same time. You are a VERY talented writer - and this is a wonderful gift. *hugs*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you soooo much this lovely words, dear heart! I was so nervous you won't like it and now I can embrace the whole wide world and I'll start with YOU *biiiiiiiiiiiggest hugs*

[igraine1419.livejournal.com]

This is absolutely beautiful, so full of longing, and beautifully paced.

Forever will be forbidden.

What a fantastic last line!

And never be afraid of posting your poetry, everything you speak is poetry sweetheart.

*HUGS YOU*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

*clings to you*
OMG! I'm soooo relieved you like it, you can't imagine what this means to me.
Thank you so much for your lovely word and the encouragement. So mayyyyybe when my knees stopped wobbling and the hands stopped trembling I'll post another little something I scribbled today in my garden...

*hugs you very very tight and very very long*

[frodosweetstuff.livejournal.com]

Hi sweetie, back with a bit more fb! Wanted to add that I re-read this and I can enjoy this both as a S/E poem as well as a F/S poem!!!!

The emotions in this are so hypnotizing and I love how this evokes a dream-like state. Thank you so very much for this, dear Julchen!!! You really are a poet! And thank you for the lovely birthday wishes! *hugs tightly*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Psssttt.... love you, sweetie!
*hugs back more tight*

[frodosweetstuff.livejournal.com]

♥