the next one ...

[julchen11]

This is for  ink_gypsy , keye and and for my f-list !
Thanks for brightening my days ... thanks to all of you!!!



Title: Hopeless?
Pairing: S/E
Rating: none 

Hopeless ?

I love Mother Nature.
The heat as well as
the coldness.
Rain as much as
sunshine. 
It's my private Eden
away from people, 
away from the haste of life.
Here I can rest and think.
IAbout you. 
About us (if there is an "us")... 
I know I can't have you
but still
I give my heart away.
But what is there
to feel ?
When you don't feel the same 
anymore?
I would walk endless miles
and I cry thousand tears
just to be close to you
I need you ... 
to ease my pain
to hug my soul
to take the fragile
peaces of my heart. 

Our time will come ...
maybe someday....
you said months ago.
Do you believe in it?
Do I believe in it?
These days I feel empty ...
sad ...
hopeless...



Love,
Julchen

Comments

[belleferret.livejournal.com]

*sniffles*

Oh noes! Julchen writes angst!

*hugs you for comfort*

[addie71.livejournal.com]

Oh. Aches. Beautifully written.

*hugs*

[mews1945.livejournal.com]

I need you ...
to ease my pain
to hug my soul
to take the fragile
peaces of my heart.


Oh, this makes my heart ache for them.

[tariana.livejournal.com]

Meep. These are all so different, and yet all so lovely.

About us (if there is an "us")...


that line killed me ded.

[ink-gypsy.livejournal.com]

Oh Julchen, this is incredibly lovely. I can hear Sanctuary Sean's voice so clearly here. Thank you. *hugs*

[aliensouldream.livejournal.com]

Oh, the sadness! "Rain as much as sunshine". Such is love. You write angst and joy equally well *gentle hugs*

[frolijah-fan-54.livejournal.com]

You describe the pain and sadness and hopelessness so beautifully - such heartbreaking beauty - such poignant and powerful emotions.

Thanks for sharing your talents, dear Julchen - *hugs*

[withywindle01.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is so sad and beautiful.

I need you ...
to ease my pain
to hug my soul

That's a killer line!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

I'm sure it isn't that hopeless, sweetie!
*offers shoulder to lean on, wipes tears away*
Thank you, Belle!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much, addie!
*hugs you back*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Mine too, Julia!

Love you,
Judith

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

I won't let you die, Tari! Breath, honey, breath!!!
Thank you, my dear. I'm glad it worked for you!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Yes, that's how I felt when I wrote it. Sean's voice in your story is so beautiful. *happy sigh*
Thank YOU, Michele!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you, my dear. You make me very happy, do you know this?
*leans on you*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Another time I'm speechless... I'm sure you're a wonderful writer, too...
Thank you, love!
*snugglehugs*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

No, I won't be a murder ... *runs to notebook, work in progress...*
Thank you, hon!
*smooches you*

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

More sadness I love it though :(

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you like it, honey.
*offers shoulder to lean on*

[i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com]

The time will come.

You keep making me amazed, dear.

[romeny.livejournal.com]

Hello, I don't know if I've commented on your work before but came here from Mews; this is lovely. Sad but hopeful.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Thank you, sweetheart! You made me smile ...

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Hello, romeny! Thank you so much for stopping by! I'm glad you like it .
Thank you for your lovely words, dear!

[frodosweetstuff.livejournal.com]

*sniffles* Ooooh no, what angst!!!!! And the hopelessness... *sniffles more*

Guess I have to run to your next poem in the hope there is more happiness!! :)

*huggles*

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

I didn't want to make you cry. But sometimes it just turns out a little bit sad ...
*offers shoulder to lean on*
*hugs you gently*

[frodosweetstuff.livejournal.com]

*hugs you back* I'm feeling better now!