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Pairing: C/Z
Rating: PG
“Close to you”
We’re standing at the porch
Of our house.
I see your head among
The stars,
The flow of the cigarette.
You smile and hold my head
With both your hands.
You kiss me gently…
My eyes are closed up
Against the moonlight.
I’m drunk by your scent,
You drug me to a point
Where I can hardly
Remember my name.
Your eyes …
You are like a
Glass filled with clear
Light…
I snuggle closer,
I need to cuddle in the
Warmth of the night
With someone
I feel
Blessed to hold,
With someone
Who thanks God
For me.
Your voice is somehow
Thick and choked,
A voice I haven’t heard
Before
When you ask me
“Are you happy?”
Few years ago
It wouldn’t have been
Possible
To answer
Because I didn’t
Really
Understand
The word.
Finally understanding ...
I whisper ...
“Yes, Zeke. I am happy.”
Have a magical night, a wonderful morning and a grand day, f-list.
Love,
Julchen
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Date: 2008-07-17 06:27 am (UTC)From:You drug me to a point
Where I can hardly
Remember my name
This was just perfect and I melted at the sweetness *hugs you*
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Date: 2008-07-18 04:51 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-07-18 04:51 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-07-17 11:42 am (UTC)From:I particularly love the way you say:
I need to cuddle in the
Warmth of the night
With someone
I feel
Blessed to hold,
With someone
Who thanks God
For me.
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Date: 2008-07-18 04:52 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-07-17 12:14 pm (UTC)From:This is really lyrical, the head among the stars, the eyes closed up against the moonlight . Little elements of the whole picture wind around my imagination like the flow of the cigarette.
You are like a
Glass filled with clear
Light…
There is a feeling of deep peace and homecoming in this. The certainty and relief of being with
someone
Who thanks God
For me.
That is the serenity of being known for who you are. I feel that Zeke asking if he's happy isn't so much a real doubt but needing to hear him say it, to assure himself that he's provided all that he can for his love to feel this way, to hear his own happiness echoed back to him. It's wonderful that they have each taught each other the meaning of happiness.
Beautiful and evocative. Thank you, Julchen!
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Date: 2008-07-18 04:53 pm (UTC)From:*hugs tight*
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Date: 2008-07-17 12:18 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-07-18 04:54 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-07-19 07:59 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-07-17 12:19 pm (UTC)From:I need to cuddle in the
Warmth of the night
With someone
I feel
Blessed to hold,
With someone
Who thanks God
For me.
OMG. That's so, so sweet. Lovely poem, honey. I luv these. :)
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Date: 2008-07-18 04:54 pm (UTC)From:Love ya, Julchen
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Date: 2008-07-17 01:34 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-07-18 04:55 pm (UTC)From:*clings to you*
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Date: 2008-07-17 01:39 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-07-18 04:55 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-07-17 05:44 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-07-18 04:56 pm (UTC)From:Thanks to YOU!
*blows little kisses to you*
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Date: 2008-07-17 08:24 pm (UTC)From:*HUGSES*
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Date: 2008-07-18 04:57 pm (UTC)From:And now I'll mop the floor with a huge smile on my face and you in my mind!
*smooches you*
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Date: 2008-08-04 02:55 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2008-08-04 03:42 pm (UTC)From:It made you happy? You should see ME now!
Love and zillions of hugs,
Julchen