6 words for elderberrywine

[julchen11]

This is for my dear friend elderberrywine 
You gave me the words: fire, crunch, tender, mittens, drifts, Sam
So this is for you, sweetie!

Title: Winter ... games?
Pairing: F/S
Rating: G

Backed against

the soaked cushioned arm

of Bilbo’s old chair

behind the tool shed…

snow and ice crunching under

their restless feet…

like they are walking

on fire…

Mittens like fluffy

white towels against

his back …

Sam drifts away…

Tender touches

burning holes

with hot fingertips

everywhere.

Coldness and heat…

Shadows and light …

Ashes and fire…

overpowering release

 

In the depth of winter

Sam finally learns

there is in him and

in Frodo

an everlasting summer.

Love and lots of hugs,
Julchen .

Comments

[elderberrywine.livejournal.com]

Oh, my!!!! I've been away for a few days -no internets! :(

But I got back just in time for this gorgeous piece. I love the sense of movement -

snow and ice crunching under

their restless feet…

the tiniest bit of hesitancy? shyness? from Sam, and Frodo's sure persistence -

Sam drifts away…

Tender touches

burning holes

with hot fingertips

everywhere.

And that lovely melting ending -

In the depth of winter

Sam finally learns

there is in him and

in Frodo

an everlasting summer.

Just so beautiful! Thank you very much - *happy hugs back*

EBWine

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Awwwww, I'm soooo happy, you like it my dear! Thank you!
Maybe - listening to their restless feet - they aren't that shy ... in the heat of the moment *smiles at you*
*hugs you madly*