6 words for aliensouldream

[julchen11]

My dearest friend aliensouldream  gave me these words:
shoud, break, pull, fade, pale, harsh

So here we go, sweetie:

Title: "Loss"
Pairing: C/Z
Rating: PG

I want to shout !
The hurt is enough…

I long for strength

I long for weight

To feel harsh ground

As rough against my body…

Running my fingers

Along your crumbled letter

Breaks me.

 

 

Life isn’t fair –

Remembering our last evening

You were sitting on the bed …

So pale…

Shielding your eyes with your hands

That I may not see the darkness.

The light of your eyes …

Fading…

When you left me.
I wanted to shout: 

I am flesh and blood.
Touch me; I wont break.

 

You search for something that isn't there.
Am I a mystery? I think not.

 

 

It will be a long pull

To get you back, Casey.

 

I crave my love …

Of almost too much love.
 

Love you, sweetie!

Comments

[honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com]

Are they all broken up in this? UGH! CASEY! Get your cute lil' butt back to Zeke, take him in your arms and demand a day's worth of lovemaking!

Poor sweet Zeke! *cuddles him*!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

LOL! Who could resist Zeke? Thank you, honey. *cuddles YOU*

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

Oh no no go back Casey :(

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

:-) I think he'll go back.

[addie71.livejournal.com]

Oh no, Casey! Why?

That is an amazing picture.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

I always loved this picture.
Thank you, dearest!

[prisca1960.livejournal.com]

Waaahhhh ... What are you doing?

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

*giggles* So Casey should go back it seems ...

[frolijah-fan-54.livejournal.com]

So heartbreaking!! You write so vividly - I can feel their pain. *sniff*

I'll say it again, dear Julchen - you are so incredibly talented!!

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

You make me blush, Mary. I'm more than glad you like it. *hugs you gently*
Thank you, my dear.

[verangel.livejournal.com]

*whimpers* and this picture. Could be Casey's long lashes. *sniff* xooox v

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

It's a stunning photo, isn't it and yes, it could be Casey's lashes.
*hugs you very long and extra tight*

[aliensouldream.livejournal.com]

Wow, this is stunning!

I'm so sorry I missed this, dear one.

What drama in these words. Already I'm wondering what terrible thing has caused such hurt. The pain of breakup is so raw and anguished, poor Zeke, poor Casey ...

Running my fingers

Along your crumbled letter

Breaks me.

What betrayal could drive apart two people so deeply in love? Oh Zeke, what have you done now?

It seems to finish on a note of determination. I'm glad Zeke feels strong enough to get Casey back, but maybe he knows his love is an obsession?


It will be a long pull

To get you back, Casey.


I crave my love …

Of almost too much love.


Perfect, tortured, dark and mysterious! I can't believe you were able to write this from those words! Amazing.

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Awwww, I'm so glad you like it, sweetie.
It's one of those scribblings you could go forward or back - the words you've chosen were simply perfect! :-)

"Maybe he knows his love is an obsession?"

Maybe... another line that leaves me thoughtful, inspired anyway :-)

My dad said once to me - you can read, therefore you can write. Just do it. And he gave me the first 6 words in my life. That's when all started - let me think - 35 years ago and it still works :-)

Biggest hugs,
Julchen