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My dearest friend
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aliensouldream gave me these words: shoud, break, pull, fade, pale, harsh
So here we go, sweetie:
Title: "Loss"
Pairing: C/Z
Rating: PG
I want to shout !
The hurt is enough…
I long for strength
I long for weight
To feel harsh ground
As rough against my body…
Running my fingers
Along your crumbled letter
Breaks me.
Life isn’t fair –
Remembering our last evening
You were sitting on the bed …
So pale…
Shielding your eyes with your hands
That I may not see the darkness.
The light of your eyes …
Fading…
When you left me.
I wanted to shout:
I am flesh and blood.
Touch me; I wont break.
You search for something that isn't there.
Am I a mystery? I think not.
It will be a long pull
To get you back, Casey.
I crave my love …
Of almost too much love.
Love you, sweetie!
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Date: 2008-12-11 10:45 pm (UTC)From:I'm so sorry I missed this, dear one.
What drama in these words. Already I'm wondering what terrible thing has caused such hurt. The pain of breakup is so raw and anguished, poor Zeke, poor Casey ...
Running my fingers
Along your crumbled letter
Breaks me.
What betrayal could drive apart two people so deeply in love? Oh Zeke, what have you done now?
It seems to finish on a note of determination. I'm glad Zeke feels strong enough to get Casey back, but maybe he knows his love is an obsession?
It will be a long pull
To get you back, Casey.
I crave my love …
Of almost too much love.
Perfect, tortured, dark and mysterious! I can't believe you were able to write this from those words! Amazing.